Sticks & Stones (pt.2)

So tonight I did my first sketch of the shape of this piece. Again, no staff paper, just a pen and a blank sheet of paper; but rather than words, it's like a cross between a timeline and an impressionistic drawing. Frankly, it looks like a 3 year old got loose with the stationery again... I'd actually have the audacity to post a picture of said sketch for your delectation, but - well, I'm just not sold on it yet. It doesn't quite feel right, and I'm sloooowly learning that if it doesn't feel right now, it ain't gonna feel any better later! So I'm gonna stare at it a little while longer, maybe sleep on it...